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-her heart was attached to a string,
being tugged along day-by-day and
she thought that maybe, it's been
passed one too many times and
burned
by the fires of every hand that's
touched the other end, even the
smallest whispers of a brush
have left the tips of her eyelashes
singed
and the string's lying abandoned
again, in the open space that she
might as well have been blind to
there's only so many senses she
can use before they're exhausted
only so many currents of emotion
she can allow herself to drown in
before her heart and it's shell are
in shreds
hanging like glass shards-
being tugged along day-by-day and
she thought that maybe, it's been
passed one too many times and
burned
by the fires of every hand that's
touched the other end, even the
smallest whispers of a brush
have left the tips of her eyelashes
singed
and the string's lying abandoned
again, in the open space that she
might as well have been blind to
there's only so many senses she
can use before they're exhausted
only so many currents of emotion
she can allow herself to drown in
before her heart and it's shell are
in shreds
hanging like glass shards-
This is a doodle as well, but probably not one I really like much. This has something (vaguely) to do with empathy.
Counting Stars - OneRepublic
I'm rather surprised I like this song, not usually what I go for, I guess?
Counting Stars - OneRepublic
I'm rather surprised I like this song, not usually what I go for, I guess?
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Great stuff, but I dunno if a space is needed after each important word/s; I get you are trying to single it out and put emphasis on it, but I think ti stands fine on its own as its own line, as part of the stanzas.