Recording

Sep 29, 20152 min read

Deviation Actions

Published: Sep 29, 2015

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_{I'm feeling a little better about this today. Thanks to some lovely feedback from hypermagical (Insert the "I forgot to put this here before" look of shame).

So, here's the recording for this piece here:

[45]-and i found you on the ocean floor,
tied into the vines of a water-
forest, you lost
yourself, when the moon
sunk into the sea, failing to end
this eternity disguised as nightfall,
and you chased after a ghost: a ribbon
of a hundred feet still tethering
you to the ground
[the world won't end no matter
how far the moon-shine claws;
turn, and play dead
to the words leaving my
lungs, whispers drowned
through a time-ca(u)lled-wind]
the ribbon tore [warnings
unheeded] and i
could, not
help but watch
you
fade
--
[your remains went up
in a puff of smoke, blue,
icy, cold, frozen, blue; slipped
through my outstretched, pale-
gloved fingers, three seconds
too late]- [Link]

Let me know what you think! Apologies in advance for the terrible quality. I've paused at the end of every line to some degree because I usually feel like what I write is in broken sentences, but please do let me know if it's distracting.

This might just have gone horribly, horribly wrong.

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